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Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby

Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby.

Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby.

Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

introduction:
In the contemporary era, it is a moot point that smoking has detrimental effects on the smoker as well as the people living around him. A significant chunk of the community welcomes the conception, whereas the remaining members oppose the same. In this essay, I will explain this point of view in detail with the relevant examples to support my argument.
paragraph 1:
I am in agreement to a large extent with the aforementioned notion. Multifarious reasons can be discussed to justify my stance. The most conspicuous one is the smoker himself welcomes deadly diseases like cancer (mouth and lungs), kidney failure to his body. For instance, a cigarette contains killing components like tobacco, nicotine, and carbon monoxide these destroy the airbus of the lungs. As a consequence, a person’s digestive system starts to stop working. Its impacts do not appear overnight but if its consumption lasts for years a brutal death can knock at your door. Additionally, it is more harmful to passive smokers. To illustrate this, I would quote an instance of my friend who is suffering from lung cancer. However, he had never smoked in his life. He got infected just because his father is an active smoker. Having lived in the same house inhaling cigarette smoke he got affected.
paragraph 2:
On the other hand, I do have some grounds against the central idea. First and foremost rationale is it may bring some of the businesses to an end. For instance, pubs and discos are usually visited by a proportion of 80% of smokers. If it is banned completely it will wash off above mentioned businesses.
overall:
To put it in a nutshell, I personally believe that it is difficult to persuade people to quit but it must be prohibited in public places. Moreover, in clubs, there should be a separate area for smoking so passive smokers would not suffer.

this is the end of writing task 2:(Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby.Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?)

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